ext_26833 ([identity profile] anuna-81.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] frea_o 2012-10-28 07:23 pm (UTC)

OH MY GOD!!!! CLINT BARTON, DID YOU JUST PULL RICHARD CASTLE ON NATASHA??! (well he almost did)

I LOVED THIS. LOVED. I want to hug this fic and draw hearts around it and hold it and never let go! This was so good! I like how you built up their relationship, how it's... subdued, and things are said between the lines and not truly spoken (well not until they have that memorable sparring match). But. THAT PRICELESS MOMENT WHEN SHE FLIPPED THE FIRST BOOK OPEN. And then the temperature dropped. And Darcy kept on talking with the sales clerk! And then the Hawkhead fandom, OH MY GOD. And the way she insulted him to make him finally admit to her he wrote all those books, oh Clint, darling, were you writing fanfiction? LOL, well, something similar.

And then Thor caught them naked. And everything else! I just LOVED this,s tart to finish. You have a smooth style, it's very fun, it's easy to follow, and it pulls you in right away. I wish I knew how to do that.

SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS STORY. SO MUCH LOVE.

Also - Clint and writing, it makes sense, because writing requires solitude, and Clit is good at that, and also observation. Just - GUH. AMAZING.

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